Sunday, January 28, 2018

Will's Good Idea for the Week of 1-26-18

Scrapping Pershing in Command

We spent all week reading and re-reading Pershing in Command and came away appalled.

First off, who edited this thing? It's a freakin' disaster. Too many needless words, run on sentences, underdeveloped paragraphs....

Second, the things we thought made Pershing in Command different just distract from the narrative.

Thirdly if there's nothing to make it different, what's the point?

And D What the fuck? Professionals looked at this book and said, 'yeah, sure!'

I dunno, maybe we're just being too critical, but man....

Times like these, I'm just glad we have money in the Banana Stand.

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