The Austrian Painter

Going through the MS a third time, things are looking pretty good.

We're making some minor plot point changes, character X worked at Y rather than Z, and the like.

We're also omitting needless sentences which is tidying things up nicely.

We're also trying to make sure all of the Austrian Painter's character traits make it through. For example we've made no reference to the Austrian Painter's love of opera.

The flashbacks only go through the 1930's. We may need another chapter or two.

We'll see.