Alright...going back through The Battle of the Three Seas. So far the first two chapters look....ok. Lots of words, which means lots of words to remove. We've been eliminating sentences, and really made a page work by rearranging paragraphs. We need to work a little more on out Kriegsmarine chapter, but that's no problem.
We haven't gotten to the Battle of the Barents Sea. That's where the challenge lies.
But the Battle of the Black Sea and the Battle of the Sea of Okhosk should be...ok.
We pronounce, god laughs.
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