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Wednesday, April 24, 2019

Three Seas

The Battle of the Sea of Japan, or The Battle of the Sea of Okhotsk, whatever, looks decent. 

At least we're coming away from it thinking, it doesn't suck too bad.'


Actually we had forgotten several scenes we wrote some time ago.

We think another scene where officers are standing around a map would be redundant in the extreme.


Even you people don't want to see that again, right? Right?!


So we handled this chapter differently than others. We think we've pulled off that thing where we have POV characters witnessing the action.


As always, can we make this chapter better?

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