The Battle of the Barents Sea

All....right...now.....

We express our enthusiasm and general pleasedness...

[pleasedness?-Ed]

...with the first chapter of the Battle of the Barents Sea.

The chapter flows. 

The chapter makes sense.

The chapter didn't need much work.

There are three days in the chapter and while days one and three are seven scenes, day two is only three scenes. This is not necessarily a problem, but we wonder if there's an opportunity there.

For the first time the Battle of the Barents Sea is in good shape.

Oh, and the gout's clearing up!