We are plugging along here.
Now that we've entered The Final Storm's second half we are less pleased.
We are finding plenty of needless words to omit, also needless sentences and asides.
Now, one of the sections is titled The Battle of the Three Seas. We are finding one of those battles bare and otherwise inadequate. We will have to chop that chapter or expand it.
We like the title, The Battle of the Three Seas.
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