Ok, so we're slugging our way through Part II. As noted before II is not as well kept as Part I, but it's still pretty good.
We've had to clean up some things, of course. But the biggest issue is clarification. Where did this guy come from? What do you mean by that? etc.
The other big issue is scene order. We agonized a lot over order last year. Frankly it looks like we really messed up on that one. We're spending a lot of time re-working the order.
The good news is all of these changes make a big book infinitely better.
We've also decided that the chapter we chopped needs to go back in. We'll probably have to expand it as well. Hello rising sun.
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