Command This

We've been going through Pershing in Command all week and have gotten about half way through.

We haven't so much as opened the original document since sometime in 2016 so we have the benefit of an absolutely fresh perspective. It's almost as if we haven't read the MS before.

So far we think we'll axe an entire chapter.

I dunno, maybe we're getting bitter and cynical...

[getting?-Ed]

...Anyhoo, but we've read some good parts but overall find ourselves thinking, 'Why are we reading this?' Then we got to one section and thought, 'Jaysus!'...

[Jaysus?-Ed]

...This was edited?

It's kind of a ritual at this point, but right now, Pershing in Command sucks.