Blooming

Going through Blooms, not to mention Polish Storm, we like what we see but there is a nagging feeling.

We find ourselves saying, 'OK, the writing is fine, but can it be better?'

Simply put, writing The Austrian Painter forced us to be more descriptive and detailed becuase Hitler was a writer who described things in detail.

Now we're in the habit of doing just that and we find sentences describing something and think, 'This should be a whole paragraph.'

This doesn't really matter with Polish Storm, it ain't high lit after all, but could matter with Blooms.