The Final Storm

We're working on the Final Storm Part II, Battle of the Three Seas. 

For some reason the chapter about Task Force 60 at Dixie Station just isn't working.

What about a news reporter on deck to chronicle events?

Maybe.

We have also inserted a new opening to the chapter describing carriers, strike groups assembling and the like. So far this seems to clarify and articulate the chapter.

This is an opportunity to write about an idea we've thought was so cool for 25 years. Let's get it right.