Thursday, September 6, 2018

Earlier...in Produce Section

We've been wondering why Chapter I of The Battle of the Three Seas isn't working.

While at the grocery store we figured it out.

Toward the end of the chapter the Soviets do a thing which could swing the battle their way, or at least hurt the Americans. But really, they could have done that thing much earlier. 

As we grabbed a bottle of EVVO we realized we must needs a reason for why the Soviets do not do that thing much earlier. Also, this gives us a chance to add tension on the American side, and character on the Soviet side.

As we went into the produce section, we pondered the character of TU-22 Backfire pilots...then we saw that brunette shopping after the gym and our mind wondered elsewhere.

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