Wednesday, February 13, 2019

Three Seas and One Day and !@#$

We are slogging through The Battle of the Barents Sea: The First Day.

In fact we spent all day yesterday home with three kids...

[Snow day!-Ed]

Yes our wuss school district....ok, to be honest the timing on that one was tricky.

Anywho, we burned through the whole day working and reworking 5000 words or so.

The last time we looked at this was November and we are baffled. The First Day seemed fine back then. Why?

And why does it seem to suck now?

In some cases we merely had to re-order paragraphs.

But in other cases we found what we wrote to be nonsensical.

We think the relationship between Johnson and Kelso stands as is.

Whatever and why, our policy of writing something, putting it down and coming back to it later is vindicated. So vindicated.

Below, an absolutely spot on visual representation:


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