So far this chapter is looking pretty Ok .
As with every other chapter we are encountering some wordy bits, some places where the sentences should be reversed, etc etc. We're lopping off sentences and omitting needless words.
From a chronological flow standpoint things are good.
The chapter may be ship-shape this week.
Maybe.
Which will free us up to edit the big one, the top dog, the big kahuna, el chapter grande, chapter numero uno, the chapter of chapters, the chapter of hosts - The Battle of the Barents Sea.
*No matter how hard we try we will never spell that right.
Those interested in World War 1990 may start with Arctic Storm:
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