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We've spent a lot of time reading Pershing's War: 1919 thinking, what the fuck is this? Who the fuck are these people?

Here's an interesting paragraph:

Lange, a large man in his youth, had gone fat during the war. The result of stress, worry, and time around the HQ with nothing to do but anticipate events and snack. He’d lost a few kilos like everyone else during the Turnip Winter and Von Ledebur noticed the man was back to the original holes on his belt.

We thought we needed to eliminate the part about Lange losing a few pounds during the Turnip Winter as it seemingly contradicted the notion of him having grown fat. But the last bit about him being back to the original belt holes validated everything.