Reviewing the Klazienaveen Politie chapter yesterday we had forgotten we cut out about 2,000 words, which is fine, as we've been worried about how we were going to fix that scene.
Problem solved.
Things look pretty good.
We can't get away with the following. 'Vehicles coming up the street...damn...they're Soviet....wait....no....they're American....No! They're Dutch! They're Dutch!'
Can't do it, right? Right?
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