Showing posts with label Kalzienaveen. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Kalzienaveen. Show all posts

Tuesday, October 15, 2019

Klazed Out

The Klazienaveen chapter is duuuun? (he said in an elongated up-talking, questioning manner).

Needs editing of course.

This should clear the way for the final battle of Dutch I Corps against a couple or three Soviet divisions. 

Some of that was done waaaaaay back in December. 

Now we wrote those bits in a different style, without hard breaks just segways passing off one character POV to another. You know, a tanker see's an F-16 in the sky, the POV gets passed off the F-16 pilot.

Should we keep it that way?

In the meantime we'll tool with the naval chapter some.