The Klazienaveen chapter is duuuun? (he said in an elongated up-talking, questioning manner).
Needs editing of course.
This should clear the way for the final battle of Dutch I Corps against a couple or three Soviet divisions.
Some of that was done waaaaaay back in December.
Now we wrote those bits in a different style, without hard breaks just segways passing off one character POV to another. You know, a tanker see's an F-16 in the sky, the POV gets passed off the F-16 pilot.
Should we keep it that way?
In the meantime we'll tool with the naval chapter some.
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