Tuesday, October 15, 2019

Klazed Out

The Klazienaveen chapter is duuuun? (he said in an elongated up-talking, questioning manner).

Needs editing of course.

This should clear the way for the final battle of Dutch I Corps against a couple or three Soviet divisions. 

Some of that was done waaaaaay back in December. 

Now we wrote those bits in a different style, without hard breaks just segways passing off one character POV to another. You know, a tanker see's an F-16 in the sky, the POV gets passed off the F-16 pilot.

Should we keep it that way?

In the meantime we'll tool with the naval chapter some.

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