Wednesday, February 19, 2020

World War 1990: The Smell of Fear

Trepidation even.

Reading the Klazienaveen Poletei chapter and we're thinking, here we go again. Something seems off, we can't quite put our finger on it. The chapter doesn't do everything we wanted it to do. We're wondering if we should axe entire sections. Words, too many words...Too much 'What's happening?' and 'What do you think we should do?' and 'I don't want to do that.' Etc. etc...

But the first half is more or less OK.

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