We're working on one of the submarine chapters.
As noted before we're beefing up the facts and technical details. Oh, and this time the ranks are going to be correct. There are no ensigns in the Royal Navy.
Shouldn't you still be on the couch, binge watching Ab Fab or something?
As it stands now the chapter is inadequate. It's two subs fumbling around the ocean not knowing anything about what's happening. We think we need a central character, maybe the sub force CO, to tie everything together.